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Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 15 2013 5:36 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder

Man Tom sure is a loving guy to suggest being sold, after all it was pretty much Sarah that has caused everything that's happened to him so far...Not to mention the fact that she didn't exactly treat him any better than Linda has under her lust. This is heating up Im grateful you've continued it and REALLY grateful you haven't taken it down. Looking forward to new chapter dude, peace out!



Author's Response:

Thanks Gadget!  There'll be several more chapters,  I'm takin' some time with this one....

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: February 15 2013 5:17 PM Title: Ch.13 Linda's Book Club

I think Tom will regret his decision, and no, I don't think he will survive, but I want him to.



Author's Response:

Thanks Stubby!  Tom has many regrets, poor guy is just a sucker for a beautiful giantess......

Reviewer: clevername Signed [Report This]
Date: February 15 2013 4:05 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder

Great story! I do hope Sarah comes back for Tom though...

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 10 2013 10:09 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder

Uh oh, Linda's got him now. Tom might not make it...

Hurry up Sara! Tom's depending on you!



Author's Response:

Dude!  Linda 'really', likes Tom.  She doesn't really, want to hurt him.....

Sara's plan is coming through, but she might not be able to recapture tiny Tom....

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10 2013 3:06 PM Title: Ch. 12 Linda Cont.,

That was pretty scary and also very lewd. Sara has to come soon. I don't think he will be able to take much more.



Author's Response:

Sarah's on her way.....

Reviewer: The Inditer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 10 2013 3:03 PM Title: Ch. 12 Linda Cont.,

I like this story. Your writing style is really unique and your descriptions are great. I do wonder what Sara's up to now. And how she's going to get Tom.



Author's Response:

Thanks Inditer!   Glad your enjoying it!

Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09 2013 12:42 AM Title: Ch. 11 'Linda'

I read the story like you suggested and... its great. Excepte for a few spelling errors it is no big deal. As like your new story I would have put violent/sadistic. I love how the women treat their toys. Your works are amazing, keep writing.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I edited the story, and added V/S, to the catagory, like you said,.(my other story, Too)  Thanks 4 pointing that out, I never really thought of it that way!(Ha, ha, ha..)  I guess the verbal humileation, and the dominance, can get quite violent,....heh,heh,heh,heh,......

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2013 4:27 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder

Damn,  a 44. Magnum. Shit just got real. But how can she protect the man she loves from others... If she can't protect him from herself? 

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08 2013 4:38 AM Title: Ch. 11 'Linda'

What do you mean I'm not being stubborn? I'm giving a review aren't I? What more do you want?



Author's Response:

Well, your just not being 'stubborn,' enough!  I know that there were at least 5 misspelled worde's  in thae lase chiper an u hed ta sean em?  (heh,heh...)

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2013 1:12 AM Title: Ch. 11 'Linda'

Hahaha, like mother like daughter, love this family! Begging to be released and she asks if they still have the bird cage, hahaha, classic. Don't know how much longer they are going to have him though, 44 mag can be very persuasive. Loved the ass scene too!



Author's Response:

Thanks Max!  Like mother like daughter, that's what I have always said.  Linda's gonna keep him for a while, she 'really', likes tiny Tom! Ha,ha.....

Reviewer: Maximus Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08 2013 12:53 AM Title: Ch. 10 'Escape'

Arggh, fewer things I dislike the an escape! Hope he doesn't get far, love how Wendy treats him. Off to the next chapter, great job wildcat!

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2013 10:55 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder

Man Tom has got to be the Un-luckiest guy ever, pretty much every female, whether fully grown or not wants him as a toy, even Sarah is no better. If I was him I think Id kill myself...Great chapter wildcat and the fact that I can place myself in Tom's shoes and imagine what I'd do in his situation only proves that this is a great story.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, I really enjoy hearing that, and the fact that you can 'Imagine' what is playing out tells me that I'm doing somthing right!  The vividness of the discriptions, are sometimes difficult to discribe, and after rewriting several-times, and deleting whole chapters, Im starting to get the wheels turning in the right direction....

Again, Thanks!  and, keep reviewing!  Always look forward to your views Gadget!

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2013 5:47 AM Title: Ch. 10 'Escape'

I think he will get away. I'm sure he will be fine.



Author's Response:

AAh! Haa, Ha, Ja, Ha,Ha,Ha,Ha,Aaaaaaaaaaahhh! Ha, Ha,Ha,Ha,HA, AH!, ...Ha! HehHeh, Ah! Ha,Ha,Ha,HA,    Yeah, Right, he will get away, and go back home and build a little tiny house......Ha!

 

                               What happened to your STUBORN-NESS!    come-on, give me a 'review, I know that you want to, don't ya?

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2013 4:33 AM Title: Ch 1 The Powder

This chapter really had me thinking. He escaped from Wendy... Who was about to take him back to Sara, I think. Sucks to be Tom.



Author's Response:

Tom has to try and escape at the worst time, possable, and is only free for a short time, but hey, he really gets some HOT women!  Heheheheheheh...

Thanks Dude!

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2013 1:22 AM Title: Ch 1 The Powder

As much as I would love for more sexiness, I feel like Tom should get away this time...Maybe to show his so called loving protector Sara (she needs to protect him from herself) how much she truly appreachiates him...Not only that but it would allow for a change of pace, rather than going from one tormetor to another. But thats just what I'd like, anyway good chapter dude, I always look forward to new chapters of this!



Author's Response:

Thanks Gadget!   Like to hear your input, and that your wrapped up in it!  Keeps my moter runnin'....To know that I'm getting some interest in this!

 

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06 2013 5:06 AM Title: Ch. 9 'Wendy' con't

Well I guess Wendy isn't going to be Sara's friend anymore...



Author's Response:

Wendy doesn't really have any friends, but  'now', she owns Tom,.......Completly!!!

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 05 2013 11:57 PM Title: Ch. 9 'Wendy' con't

Oh hell yeah, I vote Goddess Wendy keeps him! She broke Tom down in a hurry, loved that chapter, great job wildcat! If you do let sarah get him back I hope Wendy has a lot more fun with him first! Hope she wins though, she can just keep breaking him down more and more until he's a totall puppet of hers.



Author's Response:

Wendy gets everything that she wants!   In contrast,  Tom, has nothing left to lose!

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05 2013 9:36 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder

Sara is gonna go apeshit if she finds out what happened. Nobody but her gets to hurt and humiliate Tom! Great new chapter, Wildcat.



Author's Response:

Thanks, gadget!  Glad that your into it!  (apeshit) I havn't heard that exspresion for a month of sunday's! Ha,ha,ha,ha.....

                                                                                                        Thanks, again!

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 05 2013 8:19 PM Title: Ch. 9 'Wendy' con't

The brainwashing of Tom. I just can't wait until Sara gets ahold of him again. Should be fun.



Author's Response:

Dude!  Sara might not ever see poor Tom again,.... Naw!  jus' messin wit cha',   Sara will stop at nothing to get him back, and she has her grandmothers help too!     Thanks 4 the view's  and defending me from the critics that lurk around here......(Naw!  jus kidding!)

No offense , Stubborn,  I resect your opinion as well, MAN!  Ha,ha,ha,heh,heh,heh,heh,.....

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04 2013 11:45 PM Title: Ch. 8 'Wendy'

Dude! Once again you invent another great giantess, can't wait to see what this wnedy girl does with him, great description of her, have a very clear picture of her in my head and just love that she got up and walked away with Tom.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I think that I'll keep this one rolling for a bit longer.  Really look forward to your reviews!  Whenever I read one from ya, it just recharges my imagination!  Just a couple lines from ya', and I've got a whole other Chapter ready to upload!   Now, If I can just select the proper (discriptive words) and recheck my spelling, and situate the time-line, and stay with the overall story-line........

 

                                                                                             Thanks Max!   Keep veiwin'!

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