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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: November 08 2014 3:56 AM Title: Ch. 41 Swimming Lesson

Very nice story. Well done characters. Looking forward to more.question, will Linda be back in the story. She is my favorite. Maybe add in some high heels. Maybe someone beating their fists on the side of her shoes to get her attention. Excellent writing skills and so many different stories within the story.

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2013 8:59 PM Title: Ch. 41 Swimming Lesson

Great to see this back! Loved this chapter, my favorite scenario, a tiny being used sexually with reckless abandon :)

 

Hailey might be in trouble too, Mindy might just have gotten a taste for missbehaving.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 31 2013 3:48 PM Title: Ch. 41 Swimming Lesson

This is definitely the least fun chapter...for the characters and this reader. :-(

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