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Reviewer: Pico Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2013 5:06 AM Title: Ch. 40 Attack of the 50 ft. Beach Babe's

I had a lot of fun reading this story.

Although this sequence of events: the almost continuous torture and sexual abuse is not really what I am looking for... I must admit this actually was sort of a guilty pleasure for me.

You introduced some nice plot twists, although sometimes a bit confusing. And you kept it very fresh by introducing different characters in little side events. While the main storyline is captivating. I like the protagonist, Tom. He is (was) a hard working carpenter, a really nice guy. I really empathise with him, and what he has to endure.

I also find it very great that you spared Hailey.

Sorry that I can't go indepth on this story. This review is retroactive. I read this many weeks ago before I was a member on this site. But when I started reading I read from chapter 1 to 40 without a break (except for when real life called me).

Great work.

Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2013 3:11 PM Title: Ch. 40 Attack of the 50 ft. Beach Babe's

Great new chapter, love how the story is progressing. I just hope that Sara gets Tom and has some more wild adventures with him. But I like the story none the less.

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