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Reviewer: Draftsmsan Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2013 12:21 AM Title: Ch. 32 Lollie Pop Tom 'con't'

This should be interesting.  The last few chapters were not formulaic, starting with Wendy taking over.  She's my favorite character so far.  Too bad Cindy won't be coming back; Her and Jaclyn's escapades with Jack were entertaining.  Are we still going to see the rest of Linda's friends?



Author's Response:

Thanks Draftsman!  Yeah, the old Wendy's Back! Wha-Ha, ha,ha,ha,ha,.....

Linda's 'Friend's?  Hmm, maybe,  Maybe not...stay tuned, for the following chapters.....

 

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2013 12:02 AM Title: Ch. 32 Lollie Pop Tom 'con't'

Great stuff! But here's my counter ending to dudes:

Toms is Wendys slave forever or until she tires of him.

Jackie ends up in Wendy or Twilas stomach or one of the other book members belly, otherwise she is going to grow back without her mothers love anymore right? 

Likewise, Sarah and Halley have to stay together or will grow back, Halley throws a wrench into things, she's to young so don't want her involved in any of the action or anyting bad to happen to her. Maybe she has a "freind" her age Wendy can give her and Sarah to. It will be innocent fun and games until she becomes of age muwhahaha.

Wendy uses some of the remaining powder to acquire more toys.

Now that's sound advice! We'll see if I guessed any of it right.



Author's Response:

I like your ending "A-LOT", better!  (But, you already knew that I would, didn't ya?) Ha..   ';`)

Yeah, your right about Jackie,......I'll give ya that much.....

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2013 11:14 PM Title: Ch. 32 Lollie Pop Tom 'con't'

Tom's just gettin screwed left and right, isn't he?



Author's Response:

Wait untill Aggie shows up too!

Reviewer: pasret4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2013 10:37 PM Title: Ch. 32 Lollie Pop Tom 'con't'

Isn't Wendy gonna ever go back to her good side?



Author's Response:

Yeah, she changes  whenever the wind blows.  She's just an excitable girl, and she loves being a Giantess!

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