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Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2013 1:36 AM Title: Ch. 21 Jackie's Foot Rub

Great chapters! The ass scene in the Dungeon was awesome and Jackies use of him on her foot this chapter was hot! 

I have a suggestion though, it may just be me but I find the use of the adjectives "rubbery and leathery" to desrcibe the giantesses skin distracting. Why would it be rubbery, are they amputees??? I always find womens skin to be very soft, I don't think at a reduced size that would change to rubbery or leathery. I would think it would be something like "the soft pads of her fingers wrapped around his body". Just my two cents. 

Great story, looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I 'used', rubbery, and leathery- to set-up an image of the "middle-aged"-woman/  then, when switched to her daughter there would be some 'Softernessssss".....  A little 'contrast', there, but, maybe your right...., it wouldn't be so much differance, but I thought I'd try that just leading up....

Much more, on the way,.....Thanks Max!

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 28 2013 7:25 PM Title: Ch. 21 Jackie's Foot Rub

Woot Jackie, she seems to have got the domineering part down pretty well. Cindy too, although she's a bit more forceful.



Author's Response:

Like Mother,...Like Daughter!

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