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Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2013 8:33 PM Title: Ch. 20 The Dungeon

Lucky... Is he lucky to be arrested, and 6 inches tall? But is Cindy any better? Questions, questions...

I like this story. A lot. And it doesn't even seem close to ending. 



Author's Response:

Thanks DUDE!   I always look forward to your reviews, and NO, it's not even Close, to the middle yet....Heh, heh, heh....

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: March 07 2013 3:42 PM Title: Ch. 20 The Dungeon

I hope the police do find Tom. He will be better off with them, and then a media frenzy will ensue given his new size, one assumes.

Here:

 into shear maddness

You mean sheer. A shear is used for cutting things.



Author's Response:

Better off with the police, .....Media frenzy,  Oh, Noooo,.....He could never get that lucky!  Heh,Heh,Heh

 

Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28 2013 8:38 AM Title: Ch. 20 The Dungeon

Great chapters, I am glad you added the v/s since it does get graphic. That is just what I like. I also like how they try to fight not to kill tom. Can't wait for the next wonderful chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks Zephilia,  It's just gonna keep on gettin better!

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 27 2013 6:27 AM Title: Ch. 20 The Dungeon

Oh come on, now he's a fugitive? Fucken police.

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