Date: February 24 2013 10:45 AM Title: Ch. 18 A different Wendy
Well, guess I'll have to find a new character to like, you killed Wendy for me. Not only did you turn her into a sappy gooey love struck girl, you threw in the animal torture stuff. Sorry but I've seen too much of that in real life, just kills the vibe for me when I see it in a story. The reason I can get behind the whole dominating mistreatment of the shrunken guys is because it's not real on any level, total fabrication, there's no tiny guy anywhere in the world being victimized. Even I have limits on that though, I don’t get into the gory or heavy torture stuff. I don't know why you changed her character anyway, if I have one critique of you, it's that you are all over the map with your characters. You already had the nice loving giantess in Sarah, don't know why you felt the need to do that with Wendy too (even know she is unstable and could revert back) but she was perfect as the dominating giantess who so easily enslaved Toms mind in their first encounter, you totally abandoned that story line, I thought we were going to see a lot of that type of slave interaction between her and Tom. If you wanted another gentle character, you should have just introduced a new one, you're good at inventing giantesses. Your readers aren’t going to all like the same things, so they should be able to have certain parts of the story or characters that they can look forward to. Oh well, maybe Sandy will get her hands on him, I don’t think she would fall in love with him.
Author's Response:
Without Angering the Goddess 'Pandora', I've thrown Tom into her box.... Linda own's him now, and Wendy has ' locked-him-in', with her twisted love. He can't escape being 'miniature-sized', as long as she is in love with him...
The incremental, decremation, is slowly desending into the depths of servatude, and domination....
Linda, (his owner/Mistress) has dominated him, ultimatly, by casually renting him out. The plaything that he has become is about to be subjected to everything on the scale.
His only hope, is Sarah, and she just got a pile of cold, hard, cash! Don't rush it, Max,... Wendy's not done yet!
Date: February 24 2013 9:53 AM Title: Ch. 18 A different Wendy
That was a nice chapter. I didn't expect Wendy to turn out nice.
Here:
"WHY, am I being 'put', THREW this!"
You mean through. You only use threw when something is thrown, like a ball.
Author's Response:
Thanks Stubby! Glad you liked it!
Strange, how 'one' word, can change the entire meaning of everything.....
I'm working on my spelling and it's a constant fight(Ha) . Having just returned to writing, after a decade-long dry spell, it's become a little rusty!
Glad you pointed that out though, keep it up. I always look forward to your reviews!
[Report This]Date: February 23 2013 11:24 PM Title: Ch. 18 A different Wendy
First sorry I dont review every ch. but if I did all I would say is I LOVE THIS STORY!
Im glad u update regularly, this is becoming a favorite of mine. FEED ME MORE!
Author's Response:
Thanks, more is on the way.....
[Report This]Date: February 23 2013 10:32 PM Title: Ch. 18 A different Wendy
Things are getting interesting. Great chapter! I think I am liking Wendy as my favorite character. I really like how you described her personality, being mean for a while but now she is showing a loving side to her. Very well done!! Hope Tom gets back with Wendy.
I saw that hint at the end of the chapter, Cindy's daughter, a new giantess introduced? Wonder what will happen next?
Author's Response:
Thanks! 'The Decrement' continues.....
[Report This]Date: February 23 2013 9:12 PM Title: Ch. 18 A different Wendy
No! He can't leave Wendy this early! Oh well, guess I'll have to wait...