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Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 20 2013 11:42 PM Title: Ch.15 The Morning After

I just love Wendy! Love the way she got him off! I hope he ends up with her, either as her slave for life or she snuffs him out, it should be her who gets him! 

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 19 2013 4:31 PM Title: Ch.15 The Morning After

Uh oh, I don't think Tom's gonna last too long now... Tom, why did you sell yourself?



Author's Response:

Now, he's getting 'rented-out' oh, noooooo........

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19 2013 3:44 PM Title: Ch.15 The Morning After

Can I ask why there is so much blank space? There is spacing between the first few lines in the chapter, (title, number and author) which is fine, but at the end of this one there seems to a huge pointless space which isn't usually there.



Author's Response:

When your shrunk, everything seems so much bigger, doesn't it?

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