Date: February 09 2013 12:42 AM Title: Ch. 11 'Linda'
I read the story like you suggested and... its great. Excepte for a few spelling errors it is no big deal. As like your new story I would have put violent/sadistic. I love how the women treat their toys. Your works are amazing, keep writing.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I edited the story, and added V/S, to the catagory, like you said,.(my other story, Too) Thanks 4 pointing that out, I never really thought of it that way!(Ha, ha, ha..) I guess the verbal humileation, and the dominance, can get quite violent,....heh,heh,heh,heh,......
Date: February 08 2013 4:38 AM Title: Ch. 11 'Linda'
What do you mean I'm not being stubborn? I'm giving a review aren't I? What more do you want?
Author's Response:
Well, your just not being 'stubborn,' enough! I know that there were at least 5 misspelled worde's in thae lase chiper an u hed ta sean em? (heh,heh...)
[Report This]Date: February 08 2013 1:12 AM Title: Ch. 11 'Linda'
Hahaha, like mother like daughter, love this family! Begging to be released and she asks if they still have the bird cage, hahaha, classic. Don't know how much longer they are going to have him though, 44 mag can be very persuasive. Loved the ass scene too!
Author's Response:
Thanks Max! Like mother like daughter, that's what I have always said. Linda's gonna keep him for a while, she 'really', likes tiny Tom! Ha,ha.....