Date: February 04 2013 8:24 AM Title: Ch. 6 'Sara', con't.
Here:
literally 'Exsplode'!
It's Explode. And here:
she exsclaimed
It's exclaimed.
Sara is a bit cynical because she told her sister not to hurt him and yet she is. She needs to be setting the example.
[Report This]Date: February 03 2013 7:01 AM Title: Ch. 6 'Sara', con't.
I like it!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: February 01 2013 11:19 PM Title: Ch. 6 'Sara', con't.
This story is awesome, wildcat, great job! The way your giantess treat the little guys is perfect, you nail the whole helpless toy aspect, how the giantess can just lose themselves and go wherever their lust takes them, fantastic stuff! And definitley continue! Also looking forward to the edited Shack version.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Max, glad your into it,.. I decided to just let this little fling carrie-on for a while, slow it down a bit, and just let Sara have her own way, for a change....
[Report This]Date: February 01 2013 4:51 PM Title: Ch. 6 'Sara', con't.
Hmm, Toy. A revelation that certainly fits this chapter. Not the way I would have taken, but actually could end up very nicely if 'spun' the right way. And as for Tom... His reaction is going to be fun to see. Let's see what relationships come out of this "deep" interaction.
Why are you even thinking about stopping? Just keep on writing. Take it slow and smooth. Don't take this one down too! I'm really enjoying it!
Author's Response:
Not the way you would have taken? What 'Way', would you 'take'? Dudemanguy, Ha,Ha,ha... I'm open 4 suggestions here! In fact I love hearing what you would like to see happen next, or what should have happened, or what could have happened.... This is always the point where I stall-out, and slow down, I could use some input right now, ...... Anything you got would be apreceated!!!