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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2013 3:48 AM Title: Ch. 5 'Sara'

Here:
she was able to see the exstream
You mean extreme.
I personally feel it's a bit too soon for them to get intimate like this, but eh, it's your story.

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2013 3:41 PM Title: Ch. 5 'Sara'

Doesn't seem hot enough to me. Maybe we could, turn up the heat even further, (if ya catch my drift?)



Author's Response:

It's a gettin' pretty heated, but-I'll see what I can do......

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