[Report This]Date: February 07 2013 1:22 AM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
As much as I would love for more sexiness, I feel like Tom should get away this time...Maybe to show his so called loving protector Sara (she needs to protect him from herself) how much she truly appreachiates him...Not only that but it would allow for a change of pace, rather than going from one tormetor to another. But thats just what I'd like, anyway good chapter dude, I always look forward to new chapters of this!
Author's Response:
Thanks Gadget! Like to hear your input, and that your wrapped up in it! Keeps my moter runnin'....To know that I'm getting some interest in this!
Date: February 05 2013 9:36 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Sara is gonna go apeshit if she finds out what happened. Nobody but her gets to hurt and humiliate Tom! Great new chapter, Wildcat.
Author's Response:
Thanks, gadget! Glad that your into it! (apeshit) I havn't heard that exspresion for a month of sunday's! Ha,ha,ha,ha.....
Thanks, again!
Date: February 04 2013 5:59 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
I know what you mean. I'm a spelling nazi, and sometimes, I almost go and email the author to put me as coauthor so I can rip apart the story to fix it. But I don't leave it in a review unless it's absolutely horrid. And I didn't mean to sound so harsh, just saying that multiple reviews saying this and that needs to be fixed is a little overwhelming, don't you think?
And did you actually say lol?
Date: February 04 2013 5:55 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Lol, Dudemanguy, it's because I'm stubborn. I also want to help people. People can do the same to my stories (or more likley my reviews which I don't proofread), no problem. I am enjoying the story, yes but it's a habit I've developed. My apologies Wildcatman for being so pedantic.
[Report This]Date: February 04 2013 4:33 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Damn stubborn, why can't you just enjoy the story? All these piddly errors don't mean anything as long as you like the story.
Date: February 04 2013 2:50 AM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
I('s a good start! I should have checked this story sooner. My only concern is the amount of time skips and the heavy reliance on them. Then again, I understand you want to get to the good bits of the story. It's good there was some build up although ideadly there could have been a bit more. I'm gonna keep my review short because I can't wait to see the next chapter.
Date: February 03 2013 5:59 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
New chapter was great although Im seeing that Tom is starting to get scared of her and for good reason!
[Report This]Date: February 01 2013 5:37 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Chapter 6 was AMAZING, wildcat! I wasn't sure about this story until I read THAT chapter...Then I was like, "good to see the old wildcat."
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: January 30 2013 9:00 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
This is pretty, good, Im not going to make a final decision yet till you write a bit more, but its getting interesting.
PS. Jeez, wildcat, you really like getting rid of your old stories.
Author's Response:
I'm my biggest worst 'critic'. The other storys are being reworked, and I'm hoping that they be even better, glad you like this one, I'll try and keep from deleting it......
[Report This]Date: January 28 2013 11:44 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Oops, forgot to rate!
[Report This]Date: January 28 2013 9:11 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Ohh, poor Tom. Little Hailey's gonna give it to him now. I do wonder where you are going with this story. I really am interested.
Author's Response:
Read on, my friend, Read-on.....
[Report This]Date: January 25 2013 4:54 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Cat, your back! And it seems like a gentle story to me! Hehe, doesn't matter if it IS gentle, because it's your story! But it's a bonus that it is gentle! Gonna keep up with this one!
Author's Response:
Thanks Dude, yeah, I hope to keep this one going.
Date: January 25 2013 4:11 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
I must say, you're writing style is unique. It's a good story so far, with background buildup of the characters. I just noticed some random capitalization in places. Keep it up.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Glad you like it, I don't edit my work very good, I just kinda free write as it comes off the top of my head. So, yeah, I do get a Cap., here and there,... Oh, well, I keep trying to improve....