Date: March 24 2013 6:42 AM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
I guess that "love" thing that is needed for the powder to work its magic is out the window at this point, eh wildcat? Not that it matters much, but Im kind of OCD about little inconsistencies, especially in a story I like.
Author's Response:
Wendy forced Cindy and her daughter,( who 'Love' one another) to kiss, after pouring the powder on both of them, BINGO they both shrank.
Also, Sarah and Hailey, (sisters) same thing, both of them shrank, after kissing, I guess I thought that most readers would solve that little mystery without any explaination, sorry about that.....
Date: March 18 2013 9:59 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
I thought the powder only worked on someone you loved? Cindy just killed him for her pleasure, did she actually love him?
Author's Response:
Hey Gadget, Yea, in her "Way", she did actually love Mike, and Mike loved her too! (A little too-Much) :'(
Date: March 18 2013 12:04 AM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Ouch, poor Mike. Tom too, hope he doesn't die. But a lifetime of servitude seems in order-
Author's Response:
Thanks! ':{) GMD, Tom's life is no longer his own, he's just a toy now. ... a toy for a group of horny girls, could life get any better? :'(
Date: March 15 2013 9:03 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Can't wait to see what happens to Mike, hoping that she feeds him to her snake
Date: March 13 2013 3:16 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Okay, seriously the best author on this site. Nice work.
Also...please add to the other story you have going.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Ontheroad! Much flattered by your comment... However, you must be new to this site? May I suggest reading some work from, 'Cayce' or 'Jacksmith' or UHF, or tinyone234, there are some amazing Authors on this site that are much more advanced than I....
* Yes, I'll be adding to 'Taylor's New Toy', in the near future, and again, thanks for the compliment!
Date: March 09 2013 7:56 AM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Thanks for the reviews! I corrected the mistake, in this Chapter. The names of Cindy and Linda got misplaced.... I'll be extra deligent from now on.....
Thanks CaryComic, and Maximus, I would have never noticed that without your pointing it out, MUCH Apprecieated.....
Keep reviewing I'm getting a little better each day, and I hope that your enjoying this as much as I am writing it......
This is so cool, it's like having a professional editing Team, I love it! I'm learning alot, and improving so much, and I only have you guys to thank....
Author's Response:
I had to delete the chapter, to replace-it with the corrected version, (Reviews got deleted too) That's the only way that I know to correct it, without messing something else up.....
Date: March 01 2013 1:29 AM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Great chapters man. Yeah I was unsure of the direction earlier- my bad. I definitely like Jackie. On another note you're a prodigious author. It takes dedication to consistently produce chapters, as the number of unfinished stories on the site prove.
Author's Response:
Thank's Draftsmsan! Yea, Jackie's a naughty giantess..../ Oh, it is time comsuming, but I cant work much this time of year, so I'll be writeing pretty often untill the weather breaks...... Hopefully, I'll get it finished!!
Thank's again!
[Report This]Date: February 25 2013 2:46 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
I like Cindy's character. She's the 'casual' dominating giantess. Not too many of those. Most like to just get to the nitty gritty almost immediately.
Author's Response:
Yeah, she's "Casual", she likes to casually 'CRUSH'...
[Report This]Date: February 23 2013 9:49 AM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Me thinks Wendy is now my favorite character.
Author's Response:
ME, 2, Dudeman!
Date: February 21 2013 5:15 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Excellent story. Not a fan of the switch-back chapter which killed the vibe from the previous chapter for me (kinda hoping it's a dream sequence like jacksmith does lol), but it's your perogative. I am definitely a fan of Wendy as his giantess. Not a fan of Sarah or a "happy" ending...
Author's Response:
Thanks, Just trying to keep it interesting, and exploring some different venue's....
Stay tuned, the 'decrement' continues.....
Date: February 20 2013 11:44 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Finally some justice for Tom! As much as I like giantesses it makes me feel good that he's getting a bit of revenge, hope he doesn't take it too far though, I think hes better than that.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: February 20 2013 9:43 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Ok, maybe not 'death' but I am definitely leaning toward the entrapment aspect. Don't know why, but I suddenly like it.
[Report This]Date: February 19 2013 9:32 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Strangely, I'm starting to lean more to the, "death" or "life enslavement" aspect for this story more. Maybe all the new stories about domineering giantesses are rubbing off on me. Oh nooo!!
Author's Response:
Death aspet???
Date: February 19 2013 3:57 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Wildcat I have to say that if I had one criticism of this story it's that Tom is beginning to feel less and less like a character and more like a camera for us to go from set-piece to sexy set-piece. He really hasn't said a word since he sold himself, and even before that he never really said anything cept for the beginning. It didn't bug me in your previous stories because you had several tiny characters intead of the one...I guess when its just one tiny character I feel like he should have more thoughts than, "im horny" or "this is so humiliating" or "this hurts" which is pretty much Tom's range of thoughts cept for the first chapter and the selling to linda chapter.
Author's Response:
Hmmm, well, let's think about this for just a moment,.........No one 'Listens" to him anyway! Except for Sarah, and well she's trying to get him back, hopefully!
[Report This]Date: February 15 2013 5:36 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Man Tom sure is a loving guy to suggest being sold, after all it was pretty much Sarah that has caused everything that's happened to him so far...Not to mention the fact that she didn't exactly treat him any better than Linda has under her lust. This is heating up Im grateful you've continued it and REALLY grateful you haven't taken it down. Looking forward to new chapter dude, peace out!
Author's Response:
Thanks Gadget! There'll be several more chapters, I'm takin' some time with this one....
Date: February 15 2013 4:05 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Great story! I do hope Sarah comes back for Tom though...
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: February 10 2013 10:09 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Uh oh, Linda's got him now. Tom might not make it...
Hurry up Sara! Tom's depending on you!
Author's Response:
Dude! Linda 'really', likes Tom. She doesn't really, want to hurt him.....
Sara's plan is coming through, but she might not be able to recapture tiny Tom....
[Report This]Date: February 08 2013 4:27 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Damn, a 44. Magnum. Shit just got real. But how can she protect the man she loves from others... If she can't protect him from herself?
[Report This]Date: February 07 2013 10:55 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Man Tom has got to be the Un-luckiest guy ever, pretty much every female, whether fully grown or not wants him as a toy, even Sarah is no better. If I was him I think Id kill myself...Great chapter wildcat and the fact that I can place myself in Tom's shoes and imagine what I'd do in his situation only proves that this is a great story.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much, I really enjoy hearing that, and the fact that you can 'Imagine' what is playing out tells me that I'm doing somthing right! The vividness of the discriptions, are sometimes difficult to discribe, and after rewriting several-times, and deleting whole chapters, Im starting to get the wheels turning in the right direction....
Again, Thanks! and, keep reviewing! Always look forward to your views Gadget!
[Report This]Date: February 07 2013 4:33 AM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
This chapter really had me thinking. He escaped from Wendy... Who was about to take him back to Sara, I think. Sucks to be Tom.
Author's Response:
Tom has to try and escape at the worst time, possable, and is only free for a short time, but hey, he really gets some HOT women! Heheheheheheh...
Thanks Dude!