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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 21 2013 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 4

Great chapter. Ishiloo, wonder if it's some weird type of fallout creature or just a Goanna? You paint the picture of this world so well. Can't wait for more.

aaron

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: February 21 2013 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 4

Somehow doubt the people wll cme with pickforks and torches. I think they'd be too scared. Well they might be brave enough...



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Katie was just joking. They're not going to try and attack her, they couldn't possibly even hurt her.

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2013 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 4

Oh my. A hundred foot girl in a bikini going for a swim with some tiny guys. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Nice to finally learn what an ishiloo is. The mutated wildlife is an interesting detail.

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