Date: July 04 2013 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 3
Nice story. I really like how the main character is a giant, and not a giantess. No matter what anyone says, like if this is a giantess site, just keep writing. I love the story.
[Report This]Date: January 07 2013 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
Since your writing style is different, some of it IS hard to follow. But I like it. I'm pretty sure it's not over but if it is, a nice short story.
Date: January 05 2013 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Somehow your story is formatted more like a poem or song. Do you know how this came to be? It's making it difficult to read, which is a shame because I feel you have a good story coming along. Hopefully there will be other giant people too.
Author's Response:
sorry i come from other writing sites and this is style has caught on i will try fix it as best i can for future and yes there are more giant people comming sorry if this story moves a little to fast its a short story :)
Date: January 05 2013 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Anouther interesting story concept, but I wonder if you are starting too many stories too quickly. Are you going to be able to finish them all? I'm still waiting for the next chapter of Sophies Survival.
Author's Response:
yeah trust me its comming! im hoping to make it one of my greater stories and so i have sent it to a couple of people to review it and tell me if i have to fix anything then i will be updateing it im very sorry for the wait but i am posting finish peices up every now and again :)
Author's Response:
yeah trust me its comming! im hoping to make it one of my greater stories and so i have sent it to a couple of people to review it and tell me if i have to fix anything then i will be updateing it im very sorry for the wait but i am posting finish peices up every now and again :)
[Report This]Date: January 05 2013 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 2
Getting better. I like the relationship you have built between Jack and Luke. I can only wonder where this goes.
[Report This]Date: January 05 2013 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm not a fan of giant men, but this is actually a great story.
And I don't know if this is good or bad, but your writing style reminds me of 'The Shack'.
Its a compliment though! Great Story!
Author's Response:
people say that about my writing alot sorry, i come from other writing sites and the style sort of caught on :) and im sorry but i dont think i know the shack hahahaha :) thank you again :)