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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 01 2013 11:55 AM Title: Deja Vu

Personally, I can't see any difference from the first version of this chapter. What am I missing?

Author's Response:

I changed it up a little. I removed whole paragraphs to make a more interesting storyline.

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 18 2013 9:38 PM Title: Deja Vu

This is gettin good I couldn't stop at chapter 5



Author's Response:

Glad you think so. I have HUGE plans for this story. And I've only just started.

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2013 10:48 PM Title: Deja Vu

So, Andy's gonna get him some Tiny Grace? But this 'woman' that captured him has changed Grace's name to Linsey?   

  Andy's gonna get some 'FISH-BOWL-STYLE!  Oh yeah!  Thats right!...

                                                                    *wildcatman*



Author's Response:

Fish bowl style lol. No it,s not gonna go that far. And the woman who captured Grace is called Lindsey. Grace is still... Grace. These 2 are actually characters from previous stories of mine just to tell ya!

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2013 10:22 PM Title: Deja Vu

Not much of an adventure if Andrew's gonna be stuck with that woman. Good update, though.



Author's Response:

Who said he's just gonna be stuck with her? Andrew's crafty and smart. He'll probably think of something...



Author's Response:

Who said he's just gonna be stuck with her? Andrew's crafty and smart. He'll probably think of something...

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