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Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 22 2013 9:48 PM Title: The Escape Plan

Love the story so far. Will he die or will he survive. The suspense is killing me. Can't wait for the new chapter.



Author's Response: I am back. I'm writing the nxt chapter now.

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2013 2:17 PM Title: The Escape Plan

Pretty cool,  / "Where are you, you little shit?!', Eternity quietly screams.  (As I read that, "You wrote it on the next line",  = {He,he, "Quitely screams", a contradiction}  I like that, it forms a little  inside joke, between you, and the reader.....

Nice work, I really like your style..... great adventure, and giantess's Too!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 25 2013 10:25 AM Title: The Escape Plan

Excellent chapter! And, nice to have you back. It seems like an "Eternity" since your last update. ;-)

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