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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2013 2:00 PM Title: Hope's Mom

Well, I have to admit: "Eternity" is a more poetic girl's name than, say, "Moon Unit!"

In any case; thanks for posting a new chapter, so soon. It might have been short. But, it was fast-paced and action-packed. Bravo! :-)

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2013 5:42 AM Title: Hope's Mom

Good chapter. A little short but I liked it. Only thing I thought could be better was that the mom should have shown a little more regret for her actions.

And I can't wait to see what Eternity has in store for Julian. 

And one more thing. That claustrophobia is going to come in later in the story ain't it?



Author's Response: DAMN, YOU'RE SMART! IT IS GONNA COME BACK!

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