Giantess World
Reviews For Shrink for School
Reviewer: Mobster Signed [Report This]
Date: December 12 2012 10:50 PM Title: Morning-Day 1
Date: December 12 2012 10:50 PM Title: Morning-Day 1
Needs more work
Reviewer: ExplodingNoob100 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 2:40 AM Title: Morning-Day 1
Date: December 10 2012 2:40 AM Title: Morning-Day 1
ΒΌ of my dream is acctually recognizable..so i wont be very good for a few chapters
Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09 2012 7:51 PM Title: Morning-Day 1
Author's Response: i'll try to fix it in chapter 2 Chapter 1's virtual cookie goes to you -----> ●
Date: December 09 2012 7:51 PM Title: Morning-Day 1
Hey, since it is your first story, not a lot of criticism will come from me. But, description is key, and write like a story ehh? But just work on this and it will be a good story. Good luck!
Author's Response: i'll try to fix it in chapter 2 Chapter 1's virtual cookie goes to you -----> ●
Reviewer: deathshinigami Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09 2012 10:39 AM Title: Morning-Day 1
Date: December 09 2012 10:39 AM Title: Morning-Day 1
dood, did his mom give birth to him when she was 14
Author's Response:
No she gave birth at 18,Allison is 29