Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2012 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 8

Again, a good chapter,  though the description of the outfit could have been better I felt. Also I noticed some things (I hope you don't mind):

Here: Arriving on the other side of the story

store

And: “Party of two tis evening?”

this

Also:

“Ma’am, I am grateful for your concern but I wand

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Author's Response: *clicks edit* I don't know what mistakes you are talking about again my good sir. The second sentence, however, is correct because that is just the way that Vicky talks(Go to a southern dinner and see what I mean). I could have given more detail on the costumes, but they only came with three pieces; a tail, ears, and attachable canines. Thanks for reading.