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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28 2012 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 6

A fine update.

Here: reason of why he was could was because he had several ice packs

 You mean "cold".

And here:

“Ashley,, you are probably the

two commas.

That's all I noticed.



Author's Response:

*clicks edit*  I do not see the mistakes you are talking about my good sir.

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