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Reviewer: Brosus Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20 2014 5:22 PM Title: 1: The Big Day

AWESOME story man. Shame it's an end, but I loved it. Can't wait for you to post more in the the deadly farts story.

Reviewer: Navimi Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17 2014 6:06 AM Title: 1: The Big Day

I read this story a while back and ever since I read it have been looking all over to find it again XD Super glad I found this story again, Love it to death~

Reviewer: DuffyBear Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 28 2012 11:43 AM Title: 1: The Big Day

Really good start, loving it so far, can't wait for the next chapter. Perhaps give both viewpoints i.e keisha's as well? 

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28 2012 4:40 AM Title: 1: The Big Day

I like the story so far. Your description of her is intruiging. Remember to put the speech on separate lines to the description. It will make your story easier to follow. There are looks of useful tips in the "Writing Tools" section of giantessworld.

Reviewer: BigAl Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 27 2012 5:51 AM Title: 1: The Big Day

An excellent start! Looking forward to more!

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