Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: November 25 2012 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 1

For some reason I thought in the description you meant "arthropod", but I knew that couldn't be right since it's a furry story.

Here: her finished wood floor

I think you mean furnished? Or maybe varnished?

Also, you need to remember to put the speech on the separate lines to the description. The description is largley decent and I like a lot of the details.

And here: No fair running, it’s not a game

I think you mean "No fair, no running, it's not a game...etc

Here:  that pretty much stated she could care less

You mean: she couldn't care less

You meantion "Leox" without explaining what one is and I'm not sure. I'm actually imagining all the characters are humans though because I don't like furries. I'm only reading because the half star rating was curious.

Overall, a decent read, and remember to proofread in the future.

Reviewer: Solar Crimson Signed [Report This]
Date: November 24 2012 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

I haven't read the story, but the half-star rating did make me look and see why it deserved such a rating. ...Glancing through, it looks to be pretty well-written, so giving it the lowest score just because it's furry-related is completely unfair.

Author's Response:

My best guess is it's the same crowd on GiantessCity that can't accept anything other than standard human, anglo females as giantesses, or near jail bait anime charcaters ....I'd be lying if I said this was demoralizing.