Reviews For The Tiny and her Princess
Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: November 25 2012 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
Date: November 25 2012 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great story an I hope to see it continued
aaron
Reviewer: Afroking Signed [Report This]
Date: November 25 2012 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 2
Date: November 25 2012 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 2
I really like the story and im intrested in all the different Categories that u have. Hope we get to see some feet soon.
Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: November 25 2012 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 2
Author's Response:
Date: November 25 2012 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 2
Here:Amber has always been stuck in the castle
You mean "had"
Also, you mean Joy's name before she has a chance to tell the reader herself. It would be better to refer to her as "she" until she says her name.
Here: scarred you.
You means "scared". Scarred means to have scars.
The story is alright so far, so I look forward to seeing more.
Author's Response:
Sorry about the errors, and thank you for pointing them out.