Date: September 01 2014 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please keep the story going I enjoy this story a lot please keep writing it
Date: March 14 2014 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
U should put in more of his sister brook other then that its great
Date: June 27 2013 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome story, keep going!
Date: June 20 2013 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
I hope this story isnt over. Cant wait for the next update.
Date: May 18 2013 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome story, please continue!
Date: April 21 2013 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story! Keep it up! :D Ignore the douche bag who insulted you. He was probaly just trolling you.
Date: December 29 2012 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story. You need to update it because I think this is excellent. Hope you have time too...
Date: November 29 2012 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
love the story so far cant wait ti see more
Date: November 18 2012 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
GREAT STORY!!! Could you put pictures of Brooke and Skylar?
Date: November 17 2012 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is really good.
can't wait for more.
Date: November 16 2012 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love your stories but you can be a bit** about reviews. If your going to right a story finish it!!! Like the other one you haven't finished. I love those. But you are a bit**. Don't write I you won't finish it.
Date: November 14 2012 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
i forgot to rate it good! =)
Date: November 14 2012 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is a very good story! I guess it will get better after but it's a good start!!
continue! =)
Date: November 13 2012 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Keep in this way :D U're amazing good author :)
Date: November 13 2012 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
great beginning, please keep writing.
Date: November 13 2012 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great so far! Keep it up
Date: November 13 2012 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story so far, I already don't like skyler but the rest I enjoy will you make him very slowly get bigger that would be a change something I haven't seen on here before.
Date: November 13 2012 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like the three distinct ways you have set up for the family to interact with Jake. It's well written and I look forward to more of this story! Keep it coming!
Date: November 13 2012 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
Not bad at all. I enjoy the diversity of personalities you have here, and it's a fun set-up; I like the bug bite used as a jumping off point. Be careful on proofreadings; the errors can be a little distracting in places, and you could probably still benefit from some more vivid descriptions and fluid conversations, but overall I like this.
Date: November 13 2012 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
Your stories are the best, bring on the mom!!!