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Reviewer: giantessfan9 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01 2017 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 4

I know I'm late, but I love all your work. 

Reviewer: TinyMetalBox Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14 2014 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 4

LOVING IT!!! Seriously, great story. cant wait to see what happens!!

Reviewer: Noodlefanboy25 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01 2014 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please keep the story going I enjoy this story a lot please keep writing it

Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 22 2014 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 4

I NEED MOARRR!!! Kep writing please you're an amazing writer!

Reviewer: Majewherp Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14 2014 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

U should put in more of his sister brook other then that its great

Reviewer: Some_Dude Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2013 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome story, keep going!

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2013 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 4

Please continue this!

Reviewer: rygar300 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20 2013 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

I hope this story isnt over. Cant wait for the next update.

Reviewer: Ace of Spades Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28 2013 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 3

Skylar is really nice!

Reviewer: Coelestium Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18 2013 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome story, please continue!

Reviewer: yagasaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 22 2013 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 4

please post MOAR!

Reviewer: Hansuke Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21 2013 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story!  Keep it up! :D  Ignore the douche bag who insulted you.  He was probaly just trolling you.

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 21 2013 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 4

Great update!  Hope to read another chapter soon!

 

 

Reviewer: ShadowCross Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 21 2013 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 4

I like where this is going. Please keep it up! Ignore the jerks, seriously. There's plenty of us out there who read and love your writing, but don't take the time to comment as we should. Great addition!

Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 21 2013 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 4

Love the new chapter and the sadistic sister. Hope she keeps him forever. Great work though.

Reviewer: stargate1990 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 21 2013 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 4

First off I apologize for whoever rudely commented last time to make you stop.  This story is really amazing, I love Skylar so far and the older sister could be interesting.  This story has a lot of potential.  I’m not too crazy over feet, but for the beginning of a story its ok, I hope it escalates more.  I can't wait for more, I hope you will continue!

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2013 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 4

Jake,  Obviously whomever tried to 'break-you-down' must have a lot of bigger problems!  Don't let anyone stop you from exspressing yourself.  Maybe they just thought that they would mess with your head?  They should be looking into their own fantasy, and trying to figure it out, ( But, I wouldn't want to know what their sic fantasy was?  Would you?)  Ha, ha, ha, ...

Keep writing dude!  Don't let some goof mess with ya!

 

Reviewer: Afroking Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20 2013 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 4

 

Dude seriously? fuck haders. haders be hateing its normal. he clearly enjoys something if hes in this site.

Reviewer: Noki_tapis Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2013 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 3

At the time, an exelent story thank you very much, hope to read what's happening next

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 29 2012 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story. You need to update it because I think this is excellent. Hope you have time too...

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