Date: November 20 2012 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 13
You always seem to have just the right words in just the right place. It really is masterful work.
An engaging sequel with some very interesting characters:
Johnny and Sangela make quite the interesting pair and potential rivalry. I'm surprised I was able to like them so much despite their bitter bias towards Nova Force, no doubt due to how well they interact with one another.
I also look forward to seeing how Atrix, Issac and the ship's AI will develop in future chapters given their unique circumstances.
I haven't been this interested in a particular world since Felarya. You've done a phenominal job creating such a structurally stable and interesting universe here!
Date: November 13 2012 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 13
love the story, my only problem is Johnny and Sangela,They ain't shit. Richard and Kikata are heros for a reason. they've seen some real crazy shit lol. I like all the other characters so far I just hope Johnny and Sangela get their heads out of their asses sooner rather than later.