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Reviewer: Rodan1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2012 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great story! Just a suggestion. You might want to discribe how the tiny men, women, boys, girls, couples, and families are dressed, or are they naked, their age, and basic discriptions, so on.

Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 30 2012 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

I realize that it's not your story, it's something you're just passing on from another source, but even just kind of glancing over it, the story is so covered in spelling/grammatical errors that it's just not really worth the read.  You might help your read count by giving the original author a hand and combing through for errors to fix.

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