Date: February 25 2021 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 4: Kicking Back
Time out 3 chapter 4 - i love it
Date: October 30 2012 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 4: Kicking Back
Thats Great News!!!! I'd like to see more iterations of this series in the future too, maybe focusing on the different punishments that Scott receives. Great chapter btw!
Author's Response:
it's one of the most fun to write for me, so i foresee this one going on with multiple other iterations like that. thanks for the review
Date: October 30 2012 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 4: Kicking Back
Glad to hear it will be longer than 5 chapter, it definitely didn't look like it as close to the end.
Author's Response:
thanks for reviewing
Date: October 30 2012 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 4: Kicking Back
I would of been nice to have a lead up before jumping in with the "Ohh god" line. I would have liked to hear her son about the time out line. Nice story though. Like it except that part, but good non the less.
Author's Response:
i really only skimmed over that section so it wouldn't be a rehash. if that's the sort of reaction you're interested in, i spend a chapter or so on it in the first story of this series