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Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2012 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

Needs a little clean-up on spelling and grammar. Nonetheless, this is a very good story.

I would suggest, however, that it should be rated X.

 

Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12 2012 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nice story, you have wonderful Ideas, hope they keep coming.

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