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Reviewer: elza3imza3im Signed [Report This]
Date: November 07 2013 2:18 AM Title: PART ONE

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Reviewer: ephemeral Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13 2013 2:41 PM Title: PART ONE

Happy New Year!

Got my fingers crossed you'll return......one day.
Still checkin' in on this every time I pass by~

Reviewer: insider Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2012 12:44 PM Title: PART ONE

What a cliffhanger.  I'm not much for extreme violence and cruelty.  I also prefer stories where the shrunken guy (assuming he a reasonably nice person) finds a way to escape his tormentor, get his size back and even turn the tables on her.

With all that said, I must say this is a very captivating story and I check every day for an update.  I'm not smart enough to figure out what the pipes are for so please continue at your earliest opportunity.

Happy Holidays!!



Author's Response:

Oy, I do plan to continue, insider, but goodness, work... work has had me by the scruff of the neck over the last couple of weeks and just refuses to let go!

But rest assured, I do intend to continue.  I just lead a very busy life, and sometimes, I don't get to indulge my giantess fantasies as much as I would like!

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: ephemeral Signed [Report This]
Date: November 18 2012 1:03 PM Title: PART ONE

I've literally only been checking this site the past few weeks primarily to see if this story gets updated.

Here's to hoping those stockings come off at some point for a little bare action. :)

I really like what you've got going on here.



Author's Response:

Haha!  I'm glad you're enjoying it, ephemeral!

I am trying my best to update the story as often as I can.  I just hope folks can be patient if there are occasional delays.  Work and all that, ya know!

Which can also make my quality suffer at times.  I really beg the indulgence of patience with that.  I am sometimes so tired when I sit down to begin writing another installment, that my narrative can sometimes come out as flat or unimaginative.  Couple that with having no formal training in writing, and you’ll sometimes find yourself reading a passage filled with a few grammar errors or sentence fragments.

I am trying my hardest, though! :D

Thank you for the comments, ephemeral!

Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 08 2012 7:08 PM Title: PART ONE

Immensely enjoyable stuff here.  Your characters have a raw, authentic feel to them, your descriptions are enticing with an intelligent vocabulary, and it's admirably paced to boot.  Keep it up!



Author's Response:

Wow, you certainly know how to give a guy inspiration, jacksmith!  Thanks tons for the awesome review!  A writer lives for reviews like the one you just wrote! :D

Reviewer: sendit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 08 2012 6:22 PM Title: PART ONE

Welcome back.

Please continue.

 



Author's Response:

Good to be back!  And I certainly hope to.  And plan to! ;)

Thanks, sendit!

Reviewer: kingsun Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2012 2:23 PM Title: PART ONE

Great story so far! You being one of my favourite authors, I was thrilled the moment I saw your name in "Recent Stories" And I wasn't let down! Also, pardon me for asking, but it shows how much I enjoy your story, are you planning to continue "Sole Existence"? I certainly hope you do. Anyway, thank you for all your stories!



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot, Kingsun!  I appreciate the encouragement!

 

As to Sole Existence, however...

 

I tried working out several different story arcs with that one, but kept drawing blanks.  After about half a dozen such attempts, I finally gave up.

 

But stay tuned to this story!  I had a story arc worked out for it before I began it!  Also, with me being a trucker, I am able to do a lot of planning as I drive.  Then, when I shut down at night, I get some of that planning wrote out.  I hope that this story turns out to be one of the longest ones I've written - with me working on it chapter by chapter ike I am.

 

Glad you're enjoying so far, and thanks millions for the compliment!!

Reviewer: fated11 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07 2012 3:23 AM Title: PART THREE - "Through the Looking Glass"

Your story certainly has me intrigued. Cant wait to read more



Author's Response:

Well, then stay tuned!  There's more coming! ;)

Reviewer: sendit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2012 8:34 AM Title: PART ONE

Totally agree.

Please continue.

Poteial is there to be one of the best.

Your discriptions are right on.

 



Author's Response:

I'm working hard to make it good! :D

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2012 6:38 AM Title: PART ONE

Enjoyed this chapter a great deal a can't wait to see what happens next.

aaron

Author's Response:

More to enjoy will be coming soon! :D

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