Date: August 05 2021 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 1: THE GENESIS TIME WALL
Oh, I'm not the creator of the site. :P
That's understandable. My invite remains open if you change your mind. :)
Date: August 05 2021 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 1: THE GENESIS TIME WALL
Do you want to chat on Eka's Portal? I have an account there. MrWar
Send me a link to your account so I can send you a PM or you can send me a PM on my account. I would love to chat with you. :)
Author's Response:
Probably don't have the time, but thanks for the invite. It's an interesting site you've made.
I left my old stories up for years, but haven't really been on it. My vore girlfriend died of COVID19 just before Christmas, and I'm finding the subject a bit sensitive now. I'm spending most of my chat time these days telling people about the need to turn to Jesus for forgiveness and eternal life. Sin has left this world in a mess, and it's only going to get worse.
But thanks for your friendship and the invitation.
Date: August 05 2021 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 1: THE GENESIS TIME WALL
Is there any chapters you plan on writing that involves a DETAILED roasting of Mouse Man?
Like for example: [Giganta preps Mouse Man on the kitchen table, covering him with oils, herbs and spices, pushes some stuffing inside him till his belly is bulging, stuffs an apple in his mouth and pushes his pan inside the oven.
And detail Mouse Man's cooking from within the oven in his point of view as he (and Giganta) starts to find the smell of his cooking meat quite yummy despite the fact that he is going to be eaten, and by the time Giganta pulls him out of the oven, his skin would be a crispy golden brown and she would be pleased to see that Mouse Man is still alive (but he would barely wiggle because of his cooked muscles).
Once Giganta brings him to her table complete with a fork and carving knife (or Giganta might prefer to dig into Mouse Man with her hands), and Mouse Man would be aware enough to numbly feel Giganta either carving pieces of his cooked body or feel her teeth tear his flesh off like a chicken. Either way, Giganta won't stop eating until all that is left of Mouse Man is a picked clean skeleton.
I think this would technically count as a "Bad Ending" for Mouse Man. LOL]
In a nutshell: Please add DETAILED roasting content wether the giantess eating Mouse Man is Giganta, Wonder Woman or some other heroine/villainess... I spent a little too much time on Eka's Portal. ;P
If you are not familiar with Eka's Portal; it is pretty much a website with LOTS of vore of all kinds from art to stories, soft vore to hard vore and "kinkier" vore. Including Cooking Vore (and LOTS of it). ^_^
Author's Response:
I finished this story about 10 years ago and forgot to mark it as complete.
i always figure put Giganta with a normal sized guy and put Mouse Man with a normal sized woman.
Thanks for Eke's Portal. I had a quick look and may get into it more.
Date: September 17 2012 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 1: THE GENESIS TIME WALL
I'm flattered that my Mouse Man story inspired you to write your own. Reforming the character and sending him on adventures through time sounds like it could be fun.
I'm afraid I can't get behind your ideas at the end of the chapter though. You seem to have a misunderstanding of why evolution is taught in schools. The theory of evolution is based on scientific evidence and research. It's fueled by a desire to understand how the world works and how animal species change over time. It's not some sinister conspiracy to undermine Christianity or encourage atheism (and having a scientist character like Prof. Hyatt claim this seems very odd).
If evolution contradicts the Bible, that's not scientists' fault or their primary goal. They're simply theorizing based on what they've observed. Heck, I know people who are Christian and believe in evolution. They just aren't as literal in their interpretation of the Bible. I don't see why it has to be either/or. Couldn't God have been the one to put the laws of evolution in place?
If this story is going to be a "Christianity good, evolution bad" soapbox, I don't think I will be following it. Sorry.
Author's Response:
That's OK. I expected to inevitably tread on a few views with it. But no, the Biblical history lesson (from my POV) ends by Chapter 3.
I just couldn't conscion writing the story without incorporating my Biblical viewpoint. It won't be the main focus of the story. I'm only posting one chapter a day, but I've written 8, and chapters 3-8 are just gts romance and vore and sci-fi.
I guess I should answer the questions though. Literal 6 day creation story is the only one that takes God at His word in Genesis. (Day = eons is compromise, creation+evolution is compromise. There are scientists in the Christian community who adopt the literal 6 day creation belief. I'm not aiming to use the story as a preaching tool, but had to go along with my Christian friends and my own beliefs in the way I wrote the early chapters). Here's an interesting site some scientists support.
http://creation.com/
Anyway, see what you think by chapter 4 if you're still reading.
Date: September 17 2012 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 1: THE GENESIS TIME WALL
Btw: for more Atom pastiches, check out "Peeping Tom Thumb" by Dreamtales.
Author's Response:
Sounds interesting. Will do.
[Report This]Date: September 17 2012 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 1: THE GENESIS TIME WALL
From the title, I was expecting Mouseman to meet that other Wonder-foe from the Sixties. Rats!*
*Yes, pun intended. ;-)
Author's Response:
The sixties will be altered too. Bear with the history lesson. It doesn't last more than another chapter or two btw.