Date: September 20 2012 5:37 PM Title: Farming Accident
Well im glad to heve stepped into your world :) just hope I dont get eaten lol. takes a real writer to come up with there own world.
Author's Response:
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[Report This]Date: September 20 2012 4:23 PM Title: Farming Accident
is this set in the world of Felarya? and does anyone know the names of other stories with nagas? Ive only read a few. any help would be cool
Author's Response:
One, no. That's the one with Crisis, right? No, this isn't. This is MY story, in MY land, in MY head. :B Anyway, I wish I knew. Sorry. I can't help you there.
Date: September 17 2012 2:02 AM Title: Farming Accident
I have a feeling this could be a story though you mention "The Unclean One" before explaining who or what this is. The name just seems to come out of nowhere.
Author's Response:
I suppose. But I mentioned a golden bottle, refrencing alcohol and the man tries to rape Jared. I don't know. If you think I should have been more clear, well, the customers always right I suppose.
[Report This]Date: September 16 2012 5:05 PM Title: Farming Accident
I really like this kind of fantasy scenario. You made it look even more interesting as I kept reading. I am really curious and anxious to discover how this giantess will be.
Like @Afroking just said, I think you should describe a bit more about Jared; like the color of his hair, or if he is very weak or strong, or how tall he is, just some examples. I couldn't help but to keep wondering throughout the entire chapter how old he is since the elder called him kid. Well, some old people like to say that even a young 26 years old man is still just a kid to them Hah
Date: September 16 2012 2:56 PM Title: Farming Accident
I really enjoyed read this. Can u describe Jared? I like to picture the character it helps me really get into the story. I love and hate cliffhangers it makes me want to read more :) good start on 1st story
Author's Response:
Yes! You will read more! YOU WILL!!! MWAHAHAHAHAH! Haha. Ha. Huuuu. Well, it was awesome meeting you!
Date: September 16 2012 2:34 PM Title: Farming Accident
I really liked this! I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Such high praise! I feel so touched. Thank you for being my first reviewer