Two very interesting characters. The first being, of course, Melanie, with her sexual and animalistic tendencies shining through all, but I lay my sympathy with Jack, who's too smart to mindlessly walk inside Melanie, but due to circumstance, he realizes he just needs to go, "Ah fuck it." And join the crowd. He reminds me of Tammy Metzler of Election, in that he's the most likable and relatable, yet he gets perfectly cut off halfway in. As opposed to Tammy however, Jack's ending is left ambiguous. He came, he saw, he conformed. And he's in my top ten Giantess World characters list because of it.

Great story man, really enjoyed the descriptions and her sense of humour! I'm not normally into most of the genres you touched but the way you wrote it got me :) Any chance of a sequel? Melanie is such an interesting character..