Date: August 26 2020 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 4: Tell me more
Hope this continues.
Author's Response:
I'm sorry. I don't think I'll continue this Story. It's been so much time.
I've just uploaded a few chapters of another story I wrote 2 years ago.
Although I confess I'm not sure if I will continue that one either
Date: May 25 2016 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 4: Tell me more
Hoping you will continue with this story as I am liking it a lot. Always a sucker for a good 'Dominating Mother-In-Law' story.
Review-wise on the technical end; you have a few problems with Punctuation and Grammar but nothing that could not be fixed with a quick 'Read Through/Edit' before posting. The story flows well and keeps me entertained, wanting more as each chapter ends.
Nothing spectacular about Samuel; the typical shrunken victim that we all want to read about on here and other Sites. You've described him well and give him enough feeling that we care about his plight. Love Fanny though!
A truly disinterested Giantess/Goddes swept up in her Power and Authority of her little charge. I enjoy the way you have her torment her son-in-law, seemingly uncaring as to his wants, desires or feelings making her business priority and shunting him into 'Pet' status while under her care. As I have mentioned in other Reviews this is TRULY an Evil Giantess as opposed to those that torture, maim or kill in other stories. Keep the subject miserable for as long as possible and humiliate rather than injure. It's easy to 'CRUSH' the Tiny but hard to keep inflicting psychological wounds. Good job!
Hope to see another chapter soon, Santiago. Been awhile...
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for the review!
I don´t want to make any vain promeses but i'm planning to take time to write some more the next week.
Date: May 10 2016 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 4: Tell me more
Please continue. Such a well done story.
Thanks,
Diesel
Date: April 13 2016 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 4: Tell me more
How is the story going?
Later,
Diesel
[Report This]Date: April 01 2016 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 4: Tell me more
Very good.
Continue peppering this story.
More breasts, buttocks, crushing will be fun.
Do not delay to continue.
Date: March 31 2016 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 4: Tell me more
You think she would of droped him in her breast
[Report This]Date: March 30 2016 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 4: Tell me more
For an ESL story, this isn't too bad.*
*Thus far. ;-)
Author's Response:
Thanks, what does ESL stand for?
Date: March 30 2016 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 4: Tell me more
Nice chapter!
Fanny is forcing him to admit his smallness. Please, i want more. I can't wait the next chapter! Is he still in pajamas ?
Author's Response:
Thank you
He doesn't have any other shrunken clothes, so... Yes.
Date: March 30 2016 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 4: Tell me more
Nice chapter. I like that Fanny is forcing him to admit his smallness and uselessness.
I like that just as he is saying you can't do this, Fanny closes the drawer further showing she can and that his opinion means nothing. Love her psychology on him. I am voting neighbor.
Love this story,
Diesel
[Report This]Date: March 29 2016 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 4: Tell me more
She should have put him inside Sophie's underwear drawer. That would be funny.
I can't wait for the next chapter!