Reviews For April's Revenge
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Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2012 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

That was very good. I enjoyed it very much. I actually wish it was a little longer. I mean I would have thought after seeing what April did with all of his friends. Joey may have been her slave for awhile till she let her guard down. Then he'd try for an escape. But hey thats just my opinion. Still your story was very well done.

Dave

Reviewer: fated11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2012 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

Short but sweet. A fitting ending.

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