Date: September 02 2012 9:35 PM Title: Chapter Six: Home Sweet Home
As in: Riley wakes up; finds Adam dead from lack of oxygen when she rolled over in her sleep, she spends four hundred nintey words lamenting their never-to-be requited love; then, she crushes him beneath her shoe to get rid of the evidence.
Hopefully, I'm wrong. And, there will also (eventually) be a chapter eight.
Author's Response:
theres already over eight chapters. just a matter of posying and editing.so no need to cfear.
[Report This]Date: September 02 2012 9:30 PM Title: Chapter Six: Home Sweet Home
I was only half-joking. You don't have to be Sherlock Downey, Jr. to deduce from all those descriptors, on the title page, that you're going to have _more_ than seven chapters! But, to half-joke is to also be half-serious. And, I seriously feared you might have suddenly changed your mind. And, instead of Adam being put through all those standard (some might even say "stereotypical") trials, you had opted to do a fast, comparatively dull and quick stomp/crush!
[Report This]Date: August 30 2012 8:34 PM Title: Chapter Six: Home Sweet Home
Wow haven't read a story that I liked this much since 'summer job' by cayce.
Great job asuka. I can't wait to read more.
aaron
Author's Response:
wow thats high praise. many people view that as there top five.
[Report This]Date: August 30 2012 2:46 PM Title: Chapter Six: Home Sweet Home
I hope the poor guy doesn't suffocate. It'd be an anti-climatic way to end such a promising story as this! :-(
Author's Response:
so you are saying i should change the endijng then?