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Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11 2013 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 10

Okay, after reading this story for like the tenth time, when Tracy throws Nami in the glass, sprays her with ice cold water, and leaves her alone in the dark to wash up, I was really hoping that was a case of "didn't know her own strength", but it was completely deliberate MALICE. Please, PLEASE tell me this girl has a reason for treating them this way other than "she felt like it", PLEASE!

Author's Response:

Lol i'm glad you like the story so much.  Believe me I have some great twists planned for this story and in the end most of your questions should be answered.  As for the particulars about their physical features, well, part of the fun in reading fantasy is coming to those kinds of conclusions yourself.  Please, im not trying to make excuses, but I will update this as soon as I have my laptop back.  The flashdrive I have the story and my notes saved on is not compatible with this computer, so I cannot update again until I have my laptop. Thanks again for your interest.

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 10

I honestly thought things were going to take a turn for the worse. I wonder why the lady killed Xi and not Nami. Perhaps she has grown attached to her, like a pet.

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