This chapter made me...distressed. I really don't know why. Maybe it's because I know that something awful is going to happen. Anyway, I just want to say that you're a great writer. You have a very extensive vocabulary, you're very descriptive, but the thing that just gets me the most is that your writing has actually caused me to have sympathy for the characters. It might sound silly, but right now I feel bad for them, knowing that Nami is going to learn possibly more than she ever desired, only to have her innocence taken and to learn that the beings of her fascination are not at all what she had imagined, and in fact, quite cruel. Then, to top it all off, she watches one of her best friends get MURDERED right in front of her. I think my brain is going to explode. Seriously though, this story is like cocaine to me. I NEED IT. Withdrawal symptoms may include (but are not limited to): anxiousness, shaking, dizziness, sudden bouts of irrational anger, screaming incoherently at the cat, spinning around in a circle on the floor, curling into the fetal position while wailing, crying, diarrhea, projectile vomiting, and clinical depression. If you suffer from one or any of these symptoms, you may be suffering from Fetish Story Withdrawal Syndrome. Please call your nearest XXX adult store for consultation. There is always help.

Author's Response:

Ha good, good i'm glad you like it.  Yea I enjoy creating stories that you really get involved with.  Too many stories on here simply serve sexual fantasies without any real plot or character development.  I had said earlier, but this is going to be a story, not a collection of independent fetish scenarios.  It will revolve around the giantess, and obviously I will throw fetish material in,  but I want the people reading this to enjoy the story for its own sake.