Reviews For Miss Smith
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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10 2010 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

While I enjoyed the story it does seem a bit unrealistic. I'm pretty sure they would have phoned his parents becase I'm certain they are a bit suspicious by now. There are some grammar/structural issues but it's not too bad. Not sure how the aliens will fit in though.

Reviewer: Vito Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 06 2007 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

Excellent so far, still waitingfor the continued to be.

Reviewer: SelfTaughtArtist Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 29 2006 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

great plz complete it its awsome

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