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Reviewer: DuffyBear Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14 2014 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 15

Very good, enjoying the story so far. Keep it up. 

Reviewer: Frosty1979 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 09 2014 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 15

I like how the characters are described and portrayed. Despite the setting they all appear quite believable to me.

Oh and concerning Allison not growing enough... when his teacher used him sexually she was growing quite a lot... maybe he can tell Allison that, which would result in her using him that way...;)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2014 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 15

I think the mother wants him to remember who she is before Nina takes him.

Otherwise, I have no idea why she is doing this.

The part with Allison was kinda short, especially when in the last chapter, she said "this is just the beginning" or something like that. I'm kinda glad it was short, becuase I can't wait to see what comes next.

I can't wait to see him back with Nina.

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