Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2014 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 13

Though a world where giantesses dominate is not unique (in and of itself), you've made it unique. You've detailed a set of rules, customs, and cultural behaviors that add a lot of flavor. The POV is likable. The female characters humiliate, but they aren't too cruel. I like that. There are a couple of things I don't understand: How is Bianchi his teacher in the new world? If he isn't supposed to be able to read, how does she teach him with the girls in the class? Like if he never misbehaved by going to the library, would he have sat at a desk instead of her lap? Or would she have given him private lessons after class? I'm just a bit confused there since it seems that the world is one where males aren't given the same learning priveledges.

Another question I had was about the growth formula. Five feet seems like a lot to grow for a single packet. Is it random? If not, how is the tallest person only 50 feet tall? Surely a wealthy person could buy a lot more than a teacher like Bianchi and could grow to 100+ feet by consuming a lot of the stuff. Perhaps it interacts with genetics in a way and hits a plateau at some point?

I'm probably asking too many questions but they crossed my mind. :) Most importantly, keep writing if you have time. It's a really good story.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the compliments, and doubly thank you for the questions. They help me consider holes in the plot, and force me to dot my i's and cross my t's as I edit. To answer your questions, Dean is only in school to be socialized to be around women. For men, it's behavior and etiquette training. He's at school to be a plaything. I've hinted at it, but it's something I wanted the reader to come to understand as the story progesses. Good question!

The growth thing is already addressed in future chapters, so I won't answer that just yet. You'll just have to read and find out!