Reviewer: cpgrad08 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2012 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

By the tags there is in place is something going to happen bewteen him and his mom?

Author's Response:

Probably not.

Reviewer: Arbiter617 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03 2012 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great job! Just can u make him a bit smaller. Can like the woman change the men's size. Because if he was about 6 or 3 inches it would be a bit better because they could do more stuff to him. But besides that it is very good.

Author's Response:

While it's true that more can be done with that scale, I wanted to try something a bit different in regards to size. You will find later that there is a great deal of disparity in the size of the women, so hopefully I can somewhat deliver what you're looking for. Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: shaka Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03 2012 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

Excellent start!  Breastfeeding of all males is the right way to go because it enphasizes the control of women over men.  If males can only consume breastmilk, then they are totally dependent on all women and easier to control.  In a society where all males are the size of pets or infants, there would have of be all kinds of male-only "rules".  Things like special foods (breastmilk), transportation (cages or car seats) and classes (obedience training) would naturally exist.  Of course, special punishments would also exist for males who did not behave.  I can't wait to see what happens next.  Keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

You'll probably like what I've got planned then :) Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01 2012 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wonderful job on this story. Very imaginative. Love the very loving caring giant mother, an I also loved the little doggy door. That was a cool idea. I'm curious to see if his mom is on the shorter side or taller side of height..
Really looking forward to the rest of this tale because I didn't use to be a fan of the 20-99ft gts stories, I used to be more into the 100-499ft or the 1-12'' size. But just the way you write intrigues me greatly an I can't wait to see what happens next.

aaron
Ps can we hope for more of the same(like from your other stories) as far as the foot/toe scenes are concerned?

Author's Response:

There will be feet, much like in my other works. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Quicksilver Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01 2012 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love this scenario, and I'm really looking forward to where you take it.

 

My only suggestion concerns this passage:

 

There was a rapping at my door, followed by the high pitch of my mother’s voice.

 

“Dean? Time to get ready for school honey.” Thundering footsteps continued on as she went back to her business.

 

By your story’s teaser, I figured Dean’s mother was a giant, but just reading this passage on its own, I think his thought process in recognizing that fact could be fleshed out more.  For example, if Dean remarks that the rapping and his mother’s high-pitched (but LOUD!) voice are coming from high on the door instead of at his level, and/or he peers under the door and sees enormous feet, then more evidence builds for this extraordinary turn of events.

 

I like the “doggy door” concept, but hopefully females are taught to open such doors with particular care lest a male try to move between rooms at the same time and suddenly find a “wall” rushing toward him!

Author's Response:

This is a good point. I guess I've always been apprehensive about describing a gts voice because I'm afraid I'll make them seem like they're all yelling. I've purposefully always shyied away from that, and let the reader make a logical assumption. But you're right, in hindsight the scenario you picked probably could have been fleshed out more. Thanks for reviewing!