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Reviewer: eve Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2023 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

Giantess moms are awesome!!

Reviewer: Nightwatch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2023 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

Please continue this story I just found this and it pretty good, also are the the other stories connected to this one?

Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 16 2020 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

plzfinishthisplz

Reviewer: Captain Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2017 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

I hope LittleMac comes back to finish this story. He's always written quality content and I love when his female characters grow bigger. This story is one of his best along with Growing Body of Knowledge and Coming Clean. I remember reading his stuff in high school.

Reviewer: forfun32123 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2015 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

I enjoy this story, its very well written and one of my favorites on the site. It's also great that the plot and backstory is thickening up a bit. Though, I really do miss the earlier scenarios of Dean and his mother.

The giant mother/tiny son relationship isn't explored too often, but here it is done superbly; Dean's mother is so sweet and caring, which adds a touch of realism and depth to the story. The monster mommy section was so great, that's the stuff I'm talking about! Its the moments like that between Dean and his mother that really give this story its magic, at least from my perspective.

I do hope they reunite at some point and that their relationship may grow. Perhaps Dean finds himself a girlfriend at school, and now his mom has to show him the ropes of how to handle a woman of that size and age. Perhaps Dean's confidence in his mother grows and he actually begins to want to flatter her and play games like monster mommy. The girlfriend scenario could also create some drama with Nina, which may play out pretty interestingly...   

Reviewer: riczar Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12 2015 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm enjoying the story so far.  I've noticed that you might have made certain plot decisions later after you'd already started writing.  In the first couple of chapters, he was attending school and allowed to walk around on his own, and it was never questioned.  This evolved into men kept out of sight with no role in society other then reproduction.  Everyone he encountered early on didn't question his higher intelligence until Nina.  His mother and sister seemed to treat him with great love and respect, they treasured him.  In this new chapter, men are breeding tools, and having sons seem undesirable.  A rape is treated as a disagreement between women, never mind that he was wounded in the process.  I only point out that there seems to be a difference between the way Dean is handled by those closest to him and other men in this world.

Otherwise, its a good story and I look forward to new additions.



Author's Response:

Most of these things you've pointed out are intended to be intentional, and will hopefully make MUCH more sense later on. Dean, as the narrator, is discovering the world alongside the reader. Its a challenging perspective to write, because I can't just spell some things out. If you're a bit confused at this juncture, I completely understand.  I hope and intend for the next chapter to make things a bit more clear. It's a very important chapter. For now, all I can say is that Dean is a special outlier amongst men.

Reviewer: cpgrad08 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 05 2015 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

I hope she gets huge.



Author's Response:

We'll just have to see.

Reviewer: ltltb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2015 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

So glad to see this story continue, with an element of danger, not from violence, but from Nina's inability to lactate! I appreciate your affectionate description of Nina's curves and hope our protagonist will survive to sample them some more, especially those sensual buttocks you describe!



Author's Response:

Curves are good. I definitely have always pictured Nina as a mesomorph body type- curvy and full figured, but mostly caused by her above average musculature, wider hips and shoulders. I should write more about that....

Reviewer: ltltb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 20 2014 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

In this story as with "A Chance with a Cougar" you express so well the (seemingly natural) attraction of a relatively smaller male toward a taller and more mature female. It seems that when the boys get smaller, the cougars get hotter! I find myself hoping our little man gets so "socialized" he doesn't want to go back to the regular universe!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the compliment! I'll try to continue more of that "natural attraction."

Reviewer: The Lone Ranger Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2014 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is a masterpiece!!! The dialogue and storyline of this is just perfect. I'm enjoying every bit of it. Except the part when they were in the tub. I feel like there could've been more that could've possibly happened. But other than that I am amazed of how well written this story is. I'm really glad that you came back to continue to write this story after a 2 year break. This story has inspired me to write a story that has a somewhat similar new world order to yours. Keep it up!!! You're an inspiration to all of us

Author's Response:

I apologize about the break. This is a difficult story for me, so I'm taking it slow. I encourage you to write your own, and I will keep an eye out for it.

Reviewer: shaka Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20 2014 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

Glad to see that you have returned to this great story!  I really enjoy your descriptions and the size comparisons.  I hope that our hero gets to interact with more people in this world to highlight the differences with his old life.  Maybe even meeting other domesticated males.

Reviewer: BabyZoe Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18 2014 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story, the interactions are amazing!

Reviewer: ltltb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 18 2014 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

It's great that he's adjusting so well. I'm sure Nina is becoming hotter to him as she grows, upgrading from a 6 to 7 to an 8 or better... I suspect the size difference magnifies beauty in male eyes. 



Author's Response:

It does. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: blackhawk Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18 2014 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

I am so happy to see this story continued, and maybe i am a sucker but I really want the main character to live happily ever after with his teacher.

Reviewer: A Goddesses BFF Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18 2013 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

Update this story please! I want to read the rest of this great story!

Reviewer: dycemist Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 07 2012 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

Mac! You need to finish this story! It was soooo good, I check everyday for a new chapter!



Author's Response:

I promise I will finish this, I just don't have time recently, and I feel like I need to take a break for a bit.

Reviewer: cpgrad08 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 1

I know your taking a break but I can't wait for the next chapter. I check everyday.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing, and I definitely will continue working on this at some point.

Reviewer: Jay-Bug Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2012 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

I've never been a huge fan of non-insect/non-micro size difference, but this story is turing me around on it.  Phenomenally written, and well thought out.  I hope you continue!

Reviewer: justfosho Signed [Report This]
Date: June 15 2012 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 1

Pleeeease make the woman use dean as objects or as insoles. and make him paint the sisters toes etc. and the mom use him as in an insole. sorry to sound horny but this is like the best story ive read all year. keep it up! I check if youve updated it everyday haha. I liked when the sister used him as deodorant. Its erotic that the men are just used as objects

Reviewer: BlueDream Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12 2012 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

Glad to see you writing again! I'm enjoying this so far. Among the few NewWorldOrder stories that I really like, this one reminds me of the good old 'After the Apple fell' by CLH. :) I'm very curious about where this is going.

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