Date: June 05 2012 8:08 PM Title: Silicon Nightmare
This seems like it's going places...
Is there any chance that it's going up and into some delicate orifice in the panty region? Either one is fine. I'm just a bit curious.
But seriously, nice story!
Author's Response: Thanks for your compliments, and without giving much away, he might, eventually :p
[Report This]Date: June 01 2012 9:06 AM Title: Silicon Nightmare
Was wondering if her mother will make an appearance an find the little guy. Also like the fact that shes from Kansas an him London that's very cool.
aaron
Ps hope that she is very gentle with him eventhough he may curse an swear at her for shrinking him, because that should be expected at first unless he wanted this to happen. Also hope that you put some gentle foot/toe scenes in there.
Would you consider putting in some parts that have one of the characters partaking in marijuana consumption?
Anyways, sorry if I rambled on. Just can't wait to see where you take this story from here.
[Report This]Date: June 01 2012 7:08 AM Title: Silicon Nightmare
A decent start to this tale.
My only recommendation is that if you could make the next chapter a little more detailed, I really like the idea of this story.
aaron
Author's Response: Yeah course, I was a little distracted when writing this, the next chap will be a couple thousand words and very ermmm fun :p
Author's Response: Yeah course, I was a little distracted when writing this, the next chap will be a couple thousand words and very ermmm fun :p