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Reviewer: tlark99 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 14 2013 6:26 PM Title: the tongue rodeo

Love thid story cant wait 4 more

 

Reviewer: tjnova Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2012 1:52 AM Title: the tongue rodeo

Please keep up the good work, I love the gentle giantess stories that invole the mouth,feet,breast and pussy, Would love to see a story that doesn't just cover the stuff once then have a dramatic end... lol, Good erotic giantess story telling should involve a long and detailed life involving the one that was shrunk and repition in the things she does to the shrunk person is a fact of live and should be done so it doesn't seem like just a kwik story to satisfy one self, It should be long, I love to here how they change what they do just a little bit here and there and it gets drawed out no matter how little the act is even if it's just the shrunken person being toyed with her feet bare or in a stocking, or she has him in her undies for a few hours and he slowly gets to learn how to touch her just right and kiss and lick sertain spots, and maybe sometimes drags himself into her pussy when she can't stop him and slowly pleasess her for a while, you know the simple things make the story much more worth going to the very end. I look forword to many grate works from you, 

tj

Reviewer: Small_but_firm Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2012 8:08 PM Title: Silicon Nightmare

This seems like it's going places...

Is there any chance that it's going up and into some delicate orifice in the panty region? Either one is fine. I'm just a bit curious.

But seriously, nice story!



Author's Response: Thanks for your compliments, and without giving much away, he might, eventually :p

Reviewer: yummy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2012 4:37 PM Title: tongue tied

I was hoping mouth play would be introduced soon.  You did not disappoint!  I can't wait for more!



Author's Response: Haha, the next chapter is dedicated to mouth play, pure action, (spoilers ;) )

Reviewer: Afroking Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2012 4:19 PM Title: tongue tied

 

wow good chapter. I like where this is going



Author's Response: Thank you :3

Reviewer: Arbiter617 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 05 2012 2:43 PM Title: tongue tied

Great! Can you put some feet in the story!

Author's Response: Patient, our tiny has some tricks up his sleeve :p

Reviewer: Afroking Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01 2012 7:19 PM Title: Kisses and Setting the future

 

not even a little angry lol. good story so far 



Author's Response:

thanks :) i thought the lack of action would be a little bit of a let down, but, it will pick up soon :)

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01 2012 9:06 AM Title: Silicon Nightmare

Was wondering if her mother will make an appearance an find the little guy. Also like the fact that shes from Kansas an him London that's very cool.

aaron
Ps hope that she is very gentle with him eventhough he may curse an swear at her for shrinking him, because that should be expected at first unless he wanted this to happen. Also hope that you put some gentle foot/toe scenes in there.
Would you consider putting in some parts that have one of the characters partaking in marijuana consumption?
Anyways, sorry if I rambled on. Just can't wait to see where you take this story from here.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01 2012 7:08 AM Title: Silicon Nightmare

A decent start to this tale.
My only recommendation is that if you could make the next chapter a little more detailed, I really like the idea of this story.

aaron

Author's Response: Yeah course, I was a little distracted when writing this, the next chap will be a couple thousand words and very ermmm fun :p

Author's Response: Yeah course, I was a little distracted when writing this, the next chap will be a couple thousand words and very ermmm fun :p

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