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Reviewer: DreamSmall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2020 9:18 PM Title: The Only Chapter!

When this came out I fell in love with the plot right away but I wasn’t the commenter and rater type. But over the years, after an infinite amount of gts literature, this is still my favourite. So to give justice to a classic, let this also serve as my review and I rate this also with 10. Thank you for realizing this story.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing after all this time! I'm so glad I could make such an impression, I don't think any of my stories have been called someone's favorite! Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: sercero Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 16 2016 2:54 PM Title: The Only Chapter!

The squel is great.

Thanks for this.

 

Reviewer: TimeToFly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2014 4:25 PM Title: The Only Chapter!

You should make a third.

Reviewer: Gadget91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 07 2014 4:28 PM Title: The Only Chapter!

Another great story. I'm surprised how old these stories are and that I'm just discovering them now.

Reviewer: bobbyman910 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2012 11:01 AM Title: The Only Chapter!

I love this story.  It is amazing.  I think that you should include some conflict for Jasmin regarding the Nick and Richard in the next part.  I also think you could do something like Jasmin just grabbing him out of school like you said in the story.  I think that would be cool.  Awesome story and I cannot wait for the next one.

Reviewer: Small_but_firm Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22 2012 1:42 PM Title: The Only Chapter!

Nicely done. Hey, have you considered doing a sequel, or at least an expasnion of, "Trisha"? I just read it today, and the part where he spends an entire school day in her vagina sounded pretty arousing.

Just a thought.

And on a side note, I love your screen name. How did you come up with it?

Reviewer: happiest_in_shadows Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20 2012 11:50 AM Title: The Only Chapter!

Nicely done. I can't say I liked the first one as for me such intimate interaction with a woman without her consent is rape even if an extremely strange form of it. The fact that he got her approval this time and she was even eager was nice.  You did a nice job of detailing the lady's feelings and what the guy experienced while inside of her. I did find the idea of a giant penis pounding into a shrunken guy unpleasant and I doubt that I'd consider spending a few hours inside of Jasmin worth it but there is nothing wrong with Nick being fine with it.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18 2012 10:53 PM Title: The Only Chapter!

Remarkable story. Simply amazingly erotic. Well done!

aaron

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm pretty sure there's going to be a part 3 (no 3 year gap this time) so stay tuned!

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