Reviews For The Security System
Reviewer: Binary_Prophet Signed [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 5: Second Experience Continued
Date: April 30 2012 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 5: Second Experience Continued
Wow, another great character. :P Loved the little flare up of sibling rivalry. These girls better be careful around one another if any of them end up shrunk again!
Looking forward to seeing where you take this. One of my favorite stories right now, for sure!
Reviewer: jonkaa Signed [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 5: Second Experience Continued
Date: April 30 2012 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 5: Second Experience Continued
Whoa... I wonder what'll happen next!
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 5: Second Experience Continued
Date: April 30 2012 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 5: Second Experience Continued
Whew ! What a nerve-wracking chapter. And, I have the perfect song for the next one:
"I'll say, I'll say 'Brandi. You're a bad girl. What a cute bug you will be! But, on my floor, you won't be allowed to pee.' "
Reviewer: lucidiasat Signed [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 5: Second Experience Continued
Date: April 30 2012 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 5: Second Experience Continued
Another Excellent Chapter, I love the shrunken girl on girl feet action, there is never enough of it to go around on this site.