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Reviewer: allwaysman Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2014 5:56 AM Title: Chapter One

Just wondering if or when you going to carry on this story? Just read it loved it got a lot of protental too go along way.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 01 2012 8:15 AM Title: Chapter Three

Wow. This story is remarkably realistic. I like reading about how Rose seemed to be having second thoughts. But was honestly shocked when she took her own life because her guilt was to much to bear. Hope that Brent an Tom will either repent(more so Brent) or just be so consumed with their own wickedness that there will be no coming back.

aaron
Ps why is hades calling himself Satan? I only ask because it's kinda confusing having Aphrodite an Satan in the same story. But that's my only problem.

Author's Response:

Good question! My much, much longer story "The Wager" touches on the pantheon in this universe; suffice to say that in this world, pretty much every god, from Kunapipi to Jesus, exists.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 30 2012 7:46 PM Title: Chapter Three

*Shakes his head @ Tom.*

"That way lies madness!"

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 23 2012 8:49 PM Title: Chapter Two

This story is great an very real(aside from the goddess an Satan dealings that is). Hope that was all just a dream he was having but it seemed so real. But if it wasnt a dream what the heck will happen next? I'm very intrigued.
Hope to see more, DX.

aaron

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 21 2012 1:41 PM Title: Chapter Two

This is definitely one of those times when life DOES NOT imitate art.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21 2012 1:37 PM Title: Chapter Two

P.S.---Welcome back from hiatus.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2012 9:14 AM Title: Chapter One

P.S.---This _is_ a sequel to THE WAGER. Right?

Author's Response:

Yes, it is. ;)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 29 2012 8:31 AM Title: Chapter One

Yes! Il Maestro is back!

I was wondering where you'd gone, DX. I was even getting paranoid that my "I.D.E.E.A. Men" crossover had permanently offended you (lol)! But, it's now obvious that you were working on another brilliant allegorical epic. And, evidently, a sequel to your last one, at that.

So, rest assured that I will be here for all subsequent chapters. And, let me be the second to wish you: "Welcome home!"

Author's Response:

I never stop writing. I just take extended, 2-3-year-long breaks from time to time....

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