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Reviewer: Jmeuliere Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18 2014 10:45 AM Title: Realisations

Amazing! really great the story got me in directly! I like your writing style, hope to see this one continue for long!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 11:07 AM Title: Realisations

Intriguing start. But, I hope it won't be totally unaware.

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27 2012 9:48 AM Title: Coming To

nice start

Reviewer: Mictivle Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21 2012 9:36 PM Title: Coming To

I love the switching of views as well, especially combined with the unaware.  It looks to be a good start, and you do a nice job of describing the size difference.

Reviewer: Knot Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 21 2012 1:16 PM Title: Coming To

Excellent start. I enjoy the back and forth style, alternating points of view. I look forward to seeing where you take this!

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